1) The introduction paragraph introduces the topic as well as the writer's general conclusion. The first sentence is a statment which many people would not expect when the character described is thought of.
2) The thesis statement is " The distinctive character, the Mad Hatter, depicts one whom may suffer from dissociative identity disorder. I feel this thesis statment is well said.
3) a.Yes, I can identify what the writer's main topic and elabaration of details of each body paragraghs.
b.The main concept of the paper is the explaniation of why the Mad Hatter may be diagonsed with DID.
c. Yes, each paragraph actually makes valid points that backs up the thesis statement.
d. the two main conclusions is that the Mad Hatter had Dissociative identity disorder and that majority of all the characters in A. in W. has some type of parnoid personality disorder.
4) a. Overall punctuation and grammar is on point and corrrect.
b. One pattern I detected was the usage of the characters personality to start off the paragraphs
c. the tone of the essay is formal and organized
5) a. yes, the authors usage of quotes even thought they did not identify where they were resourced from
b. No
6) The papers greatest strength is the usage and organization of vocabulary and the fact that this essay, I feel, has much more clarity then then the previous "What is Art?" essay
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